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【The Perfect Gift】 This stylish lunch bag is the perfect gift for your family and friends for christmas,halloween,mother's day and other holidays.
【Large Capacity&With Multi Pockets】Jomddems lunch bag dimension:12.5" x 6.5" x 11" (L*W*H), with a large main pocket,keep your food and drinks fresh, it is suitable for storing lunch boxes,beverages,fruits,food,and so on;There are 2 zipper pockets in the front and a wide pocket in the back,which are perfect for storing your phone,tablet,wallet,keys and more;The side Two pockets can hold water glasses and umbrellas.
【Three Ways Easy Carrying】Come with Soft handle,57"long adjustable detachable Wide shoulder strap,which can be adjusted from 35" to 57"It have three ways to carry like a handbag,shoulder bag or across bag,offer you More comfortable carrying options,designed for your convenience caring for daily.
【Fashion and Comfortable Design】This lunch box for women design style is simple and elegant,stylish appearance,with a beautiful and comfortable wide shoulder strap,Suitable for multiple scenarios,is your work,picnic,hiking,Beach,camping good choice.
【Excellent Performance】The cooler bag Outer layer is made from strong and durable 600D spill-proof Oxford fabric,comfortable,delicate,strong,The middle layer uses 5mm thickened insulation foam cotton to Keep food fresh for a long time,and the lining is insulated with aluminium foil material and heat-pressed seamless stitching to ensure leak-proof,Easy to clean,Metal Zippers And Enhanced By Rivet At Major Stress Points Provide Long-Lasting Durability.